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Fanfics in a nutshell: Heart of Vietnam

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This is way to short but Im uploading it anyways

http://www.fimfiction.net/story/23887/My-Little-Pony%3A-The-Heart-Of-Vietnam

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The Heart of the Vietnam war...... Where the fuck do I begin

First off this fanfiction is shit. Just complete and utter shit. So the story is about..... Hold on let me think about this... Somehow the land of equestria ends up on earth in between the US and the SSSR or what ever the story said... and they sided with the fucking united states by signing a contract that said something about being forced to go to war when the US goes to war or something like that and then the fucking vietnam war happens and now there are ponies fighting humans in vietnam. Thats it. This story has only had one chapter written and I can see why. This fiction is the living optimomy of Call of Duty logic. As the characters have weapons like colts and m16's RPG's and other stupid shit. Anyways they make touch down and wait how the fuck did they reach the ground I wan't even paying attention. Seriously this fanfiction is just so fucking stupid I loose interest in like 7 minutes of reading. The other retarded thing about this fiction is that I can't tell if its first person or third person. I don't even know how to explain this its like..... Here let me put it in example. AppleJack was all like Rarity stop being a cunt so I stopped being a cunt Okay this story must be first person to Rarity Rarity turned around and told applejack to go fuck herself and I did just that. Wait what fuck? Who is I? Who is the main character why am I fucking reading this? I can't really say much more because this fucking story is left to be incomplete forever. Personally I think the guy should just erase this fiction because its not going anywhere.