"We will be dealing with one terrible crisis after another, and all of these challenges will collectively create a horrific nightmare that will just continue to intensify as time rolls along."
Thank you for the the feedback, and I'll be sure to iron out the details for chapter one and onward. It's also my first time reading a longer story, so I'm looking forward to improvement as time goes on.
I'm liking the scratchy voice, but it's a little too scratchy. Maybe it's just my audio settings, but whenever you talk, my subwoofer causes a small earthquake.
It could've been me. I was sick in the time of theses recordings. But seeing that I haven't produced anything in awhile, I just pushed through it at the time.
"We will be dealing with one terrible crisis after another, and all of these challenges will collectively create a horrific nightmare that will just continue to intensify as time rolls along."
5 likesLooking forward to you reading the whole story
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Got chapter 1 and 2 in the works.
0 likesthis reader of yours has a really nice voice for grim, depressing stories btw
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Thanks, if you have any suggestions feel free to let me know.
0 likesthis is a big endevour ,not as big as horizons , so best of luck man.
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Thanks, should be throwing out a chapter every week.
0 likes"bellfire"
2 likesit's balefire, pronounced bale as in "baleful" or like a bale of hay
You hesitate a little on a couple of the words
There's a little bit of white noise in the narration audio as well
Nevertheless, you captured the dark atmosphere nicely
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Thank you for the the feedback, and I'll be sure to iron out the details for chapter one and onward. It's also my first time reading a longer story, so I'm looking forward to improvement as time goes on.
0 likesoh hey, that's my art in the thumbnail, neat
2 likesI'm liking the scratchy voice, but it's a little too scratchy. Maybe it's just my audio settings, but whenever you talk, my subwoofer causes a small earthquake.
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It could've been me. I was sick in the time of theses recordings. But seeing that I haven't produced anything in awhile, I just pushed through it at the time.
0 likesYou won't. (But I really hope you will <3)
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Trust me, this socially inept college kid has nothing to do besides make these over his weekends.
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Pone
0 likesYuh
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