Thanks, which vocals are you talking about? The three of us were all amazing, but I am less confident in my own since I kept wanting to hear Till Lindemann coming out of my mouth lol. And yes I have heard of him, he's one of the only dudes I know who makes CyberGoth music for Youtube. I almost remixed his OC song once lol.
@psychgoth I was mostly talking about your vocals. Like I said, it's interesting, and I see what you're going for. I was actually listening to some Rammstein just now so I could at least try to not talk out of my ass, but I'm still really bad at music feedback. I guess it sounds mostly like you need practice singing in that style. It seems like you're having to reach for that low a vocal tone, and you have to focus a lot on holding it. Whereas if you listen to Till singing, it seems like he's so used to being down there that he has a whole range of raspy tones and notes, and he can move between them really smoothly and organically. Which is actually amazing - that seems like a ridiculously hard pitch to perform at. The point I'm trying to make is I think your vocals are good, and they're on the right track, but would probably benefit from doing more of them.
Damn it! Another awesome pony song that's been unlisted or otherwise taken off youtube somehow. At least I saved this one and some of the others. Sheesh.
The video @Hello Generic did called "New Lunar Republic Part 1" would go really well with this. The trailer can be found here if anyone is at all interested. The New Lunar Republic Trailer
That aside the piece as a whole is fantastic, both Ibe and Mike did an amazing job with the verses and I can serously pump my fist to something like this. Well done everyone who was a part of the production.
this i a good song love it and NLR all the way i was in he NLR from the start and i find out about the NLR was a little later then the show but when i find out i was in and to all other NLR trooper's we will beat the SE all the way
@Tyrone Bryant The tune was composed by NotACleverPony ( http://notacleverpony.bandcamp.com/album/princess-luna-as-imagined-ep ), who never wrote or selected any "official" lyrics. NACP meant for the album to inspire further fan works, so if you consider any version of the song inspiring, go for it.
There is nothing to say except for how cool that track was. Four days into February, and I think I have found the song that I am going to vote for the Top Ten Pony Songs of the Month
I only wish I could have had a PMV made for it, but I wanted to have a good video now (after more than a month of absence) than a great video later still.
After many takes, I decided to to go with the hissing one. I think it sounds kinda cool with the extra delay there. I could only record so many takes before my voice was done for the day lol.
Awesome thing! I would sing the lyrics of ich tu dir weh to your original mix of FTNLR. I've been waiting for a good Rammstein like song from the brony community and you delivered.
@psychgoth Lyrics: The Princess of the Sun, She was the only one Until there came a greater name the glory has begun The princess of the night, she is our holy light We see her clear and hold her dear in this our sacred rite (we see her HERE) She is the stars and moon, together we commune this is our chance perform the dance the birth is coming soon (AND PERFORM THE DANCE THIS IS OUR CHANCE) The nocturne bats arise, the fill the endless skies (THEY fill the endless skies) Behold out power, this the hour we will have the prize! (behold OUR power)
rise from the shadows arrive for the battle soilders saddled up to rattle the queen down (SOLDIERS) break through the cage bring the new age now taste your fate from her envious rage face all her pain when her tears rained it drove her insane her soul a whole demon feindin for change and a nightmare remains (FIENDIN' for change) (both lines above and below) FEINDIN FOR CHANGE BUT HER NIGHTMARE REMAINS!!
See by moonlight, live by starlight Embrace nightfall Luna calls us home!
The sun is disappearing, the time of night is nearing and from the skies you can hear cries off mighty masses cheering (hear cries OF mighty masses) The creatures now awaken, the Solar Way forsaken And with one voice we speak the choice that we a nation making! No danger will dissuade us, the darkened sky will aid us We have no fear for we can hear the voice of she who made us! In the dark we tear and rend end all evils with spines to bend Lust, power, hunger, and might by Luna's will and dark of night!
there you go, brackets after the line with the mistake, corrections capitalised^^
GUYS i found a thing pause this video at 2:40 then pull up this video /watch?v=oOpJiPISO3k and pause it at the :10 mark. then play both videos at once. Guaranteed to laugh. Sorry psychgoth i just found this while listening to this great song
The music doesn't quite fit the vocals in style.. Need some effect on the vocals to match it up or make the tune a bit more epic in scope. Would prefer bells or other instrument bits to match the lyrics. This is like a war hymn with music that's lacking to give it that scope, that feeling.
The "For Luna!" is good, but it's exactly what I'm talking about, it needs something else with it to give it that oomph, that dramatic feel. A crowd roaring in response, a cascade of noise returning the call, something like that. When the deeper cuts in right after that part the tune hasn't grown any deeper, any more resounding, or any more compounded to match it, which I think is a missed opportunity. The voice is trying to be epic, but the music just isn't matching and some of the lyrics weren't that clever or interesting.
If nothing else something to back up the lead synth tune, which sadly doesn't go with the voices, like it needs a pitch change or depth.
Glad to see this completed! =3
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Me too, I had to mix this beast down seven times before I got it ok lol.
0 likesThis is exceptionally cool! Good job, everyone involved! /)*
0 likesSounds realy nice. I love it from the first moment. /)
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Thanks!
1 likeI LOVE this :DD
2 likesI wanna go to a club and jam out to this~!! >D
This is so unique-sounding and I love it to bits.
0 likesawesome man! C: glad to see a new track is up! this is really awesome!
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Thanks Res!
0 likesVery awesome, great work :D
0 likesThe moment the vocals come in I was like...I GIVE UP.....I love this!
0 likesTook a while to find this but this is actually really good! Nice jobs
0 likesthis is awesome, nice job all of you
0 likesGreat song. Also, this reminds me that IBABR still owes me a beer from last Halloween.
0 likesAwesome mix of vocal styles!
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Gracias!
0 likesWell, this is a new take on the Lunar Republic theme. Nice job
0 likesWow, this is sweet. Good job on the vocals - the style is certainly interesting. And the instrumentals are flat out awesome.
0 likesIncidentally, have you ever listened to a brony musician called Injustrial?
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Thanks, which vocals are you talking about? The three of us were all amazing, but I am less confident in my own since I kept wanting to hear Till Lindemann coming out of my mouth lol.
0 likesAnd yes I have heard of him, he's one of the only dudes I know who makes CyberGoth music for Youtube. I almost remixed his OC song once lol.
@psychgoth
0 likesI was mostly talking about your vocals. Like I said, it's interesting, and I see what you're going for. I was actually listening to some Rammstein just now so I could at least try to not talk out of my ass, but I'm still really bad at music feedback. I guess it sounds mostly like you need practice singing in that style. It seems like you're having to reach for that low a vocal tone, and you have to focus a lot on holding it. Whereas if you listen to Till singing, it seems like he's so used to being down there that he has a whole range of raspy tones and notes, and he can move between them really smoothly and organically. Which is actually amazing - that seems like a ridiculously hard pitch to perform at. The point I'm trying to make is I think your vocals are good, and they're on the right track, but would probably benefit from doing more of them.
Damn it! Another awesome pony song that's been unlisted or otherwise taken off youtube somehow. At least I saved this one and some of the others. Sheesh.
1 likeGreat song!
1 likewow, bronymike doing something like this? that's insane!
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Yes! Together we are INSANI-TEAM!
0 likesI have only one word to describe this song.
0 likesEPIC
The video @Hello Generic did called "New Lunar Republic Part 1" would go really well with this. The trailer can be found here if anyone is at all interested. The New Lunar Republic Trailer
0 likesThat aside the piece as a whole is fantastic, both Ibe and Mike did an amazing job with the verses and I can serously pump my fist to something like this. Well done everyone who was a part of the production.
Only downside i can find to this, it ENDS
0 likesNo, seriously, it ends too abruptly, but I guess that's not THAT big of a downside
The start... Meh...
0 likesMoments later.... This is pretty good
Moments later again.... OH MY GOD THIS IS AMAZING!!!!
I heard this song on some stream of MLP and I want to search for it but I cannot find it but.. now im here :D thank you I totaly love this!
0 likesI was about to throw my money at you again and then saw the free download. Love the song.
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Thanks dude, remixes are always for free unless I get the original artist's approval to sell it.
0 likesFor Luna!!!!!
0 likesYou did it aigan :)
(and IbeaBronyRapper and Bronymike of course)
Already waiting for the next upload :D
I wonder if you could link to the original version ( http://notacleverpony.bandcamp.com/album/princess-luna-as-imagined-ep ) in the description?
0 likesi love this^^
0 likesthis shivers me timbers
0 likesIn the dark we tear and rend
0 likesend all evils with spines to bend
Lust, power, hunger, and might
by Luna's will and dark of night!
Someone reads fanfiction <3
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It's a guilty pleasure of mine ^^;
0 likesDem Aegis Shield quotes.
0 likesthis....actually ain't half bad....
0 likesthis i a good song love it and NLR all the way i was in he NLR from the start and i find out about the NLR was a little later then the show but when i find out i was in and to all other NLR trooper's we will beat the SE all the way
0 likesI'm expecting a pmv on this....
1 likeSomeone PLEASE make a pmv....
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I agree with this bro! I beseech all ye who make PMVs, give me my first ever PMV.
0 likes@psychgoth A PMV on this would be epic...
0 likesSee by moonlight, live by starlight
0 likesEmbrace nightfall, Luna calls us home?!
Are these really the words?
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Yes. Are they exceptionally hard to hear?
0 likes@psychgoth No, I was wondering if they were the established lyrics to the tune.
0 likes@Tyrone Bryant The tune was composed by NotACleverPony ( http://notacleverpony.bandcamp.com/album/princess-luna-as-imagined-ep ), who never wrote or selected any "official" lyrics. NACP meant for the album to inspire further fan works, so if you consider any version of the song inspiring, go for it.
0 likes@Kevin Dodd
0 likesI know who composed it. I'm wondering if those words were the established chorus.
I wrote the lyrics for the chorus, so the words are unique to this version of the song.
0 likes@psychgoth
0 likesI see.
Still holds up.
0 likesthat's one sick-ass harpsichord
0 likesC'mon, instrumental plz. I will pay for it on bandcamp. I did that for Cheerilee 80s Girl.
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Thanks for your patronage! But both are free, I don't feel right selling this song since NaCP is no longer around to seek permission from.
0 likesDem vocals. Unf.
0 likesThere is nothing to say except for how cool that track was. Four days into February, and I think I have found the song that I am going to vote for the Top Ten Pony Songs of the Month
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I only wish I could have had a PMV made for it, but I wanted to have a good video now (after more than a month of absence) than a great video later still.
0 likesWhy this music is unlisted ? :o
2 likesOOohhh! THINGS!
0 likesMoments later: OOOOOOooohhhh!!!!!! AMAZING THINGS!!!
<3
0 likesCool:D
0 likesday 3 listening to this song
8 likessend help
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I'm right there with you.
0 likesOooh Concept...just wait until i fix my guitar...juuuuust waaait :3
0 likessquee
Ps: check this out >> IbeabronyHUEpper.
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=P
0 likesHow do I download from dropbox?
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Right click and "save as" once it plays.
0 likesOn android? Btw I loved the way you used your voice in this. I tried it, and I just sound like a dying llama
0 likesYoutube messed up the links again with the "..." stuff :X Oh well. Is it possible to get working downloads again?
0 likes...this the hour we will have the priiiiiiiiiiiiiiizzzzzze.
0 likesDid you mean to do that?
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After many takes, I decided to to go with the hissing one. I think it sounds kinda cool with the extra delay there. I could only record so many takes before my voice was done for the day lol.
0 likesAll I had to see was "young till lindemann"
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Good or bad thing? ^^;
0 likesAwesome thing! I would sing the lyrics of ich tu dir weh to your original mix of FTNLR. I've been waiting for a good Rammstein like song from the brony community and you delivered.
0 likesD'aww, thanks man!
0 likesYAYYYYYYYYY cwis <3
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<3
0 likesawwwyyyaaaaaa tis up!!!!!!!!!!
0 likessuch outrageous number of mistakes in the lyrics. cool song tho
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Really? ^^;
0 likes@psychgoth Only one I can think of is the inconsistency of the line:
0 likesthis is our chance perform the dance the birth is coming soon
In the song, its actually;
perform the dance, this is our chance, the birth is coming soon
@psychgoth Lyrics:
2 likesThe Princess of the Sun, She was the only one
Until there came a greater name the glory has begun
The princess of the night, she is our holy light
We see her clear and hold her dear in this our sacred rite
(we see her HERE)
She is the stars and moon, together we commune
this is our chance perform the dance the birth is coming soon
(AND PERFORM THE DANCE THIS IS OUR CHANCE)
The nocturne bats arise, the fill the endless skies
(THEY fill the endless skies)
Behold out power, this the hour we will have the prize!
(behold OUR power)
rise from the shadows arrive for the battle
soilders saddled up to rattle the queen down
(SOLDIERS)
break through the cage bring the new age
now taste your fate from her envious rage
face all her pain when her tears rained
it drove her insane her soul a whole demon
feindin for change and a nightmare remains
(FIENDIN' for change) (both lines above and below)
FEINDIN FOR CHANGE BUT HER NIGHTMARE REMAINS!!
See by moonlight, live by starlight
Embrace nightfall
Luna calls us home!
The sun is disappearing, the time of night is nearing
and from the skies you can hear cries off mighty masses cheering
(hear cries OF mighty masses)
The creatures now awaken, the Solar Way forsaken
And with one voice we speak the choice that we a nation making!
No danger will dissuade us, the darkened sky will aid us
We have no fear for we can hear the voice of she who made us!
In the dark we tear and rend
end all evils with spines to bend
Lust, power, hunger, and might
by Luna's will and dark of night!
there you go, brackets after the line with the mistake, corrections capitalised^^
Woo! Thanks man, I can't spot my own errors for beans. Helps to have Grammar Nazi friends lol
2 likes@psychgoth
0 likesAfter all, Friendship is Magic! -> (insert here joke about Hitler´s fascination with Runes and Occultism)
Sounds like Vladimir Putin sang this.
4 likesWooooo
0 likesGUYS i found a thing pause this video at 2:40 then pull up this video /watch?v=oOpJiPISO3k and pause it at the :10 mark. then play both videos at once. Guaranteed to laugh. Sorry psychgoth i just found this while listening to this great song
0 likesEh, sounds like it's trying too hard.
0 likesThe music doesn't quite fit the vocals in style.. Need some effect on the vocals to match it up or make the tune a bit more epic in scope. Would prefer bells or other instrument bits to match the lyrics. This is like a war hymn with music that's lacking to give it that scope, that feeling.
The "For Luna!" is good, but it's exactly what I'm talking about, it needs something else with it to give it that oomph, that dramatic feel. A crowd roaring in response, a cascade of noise returning the call, something like that. When the deeper cuts in right after that part the tune hasn't grown any deeper, any more resounding, or any more compounded to match it, which I think is a missed opportunity. The voice is trying to be epic, but the music just isn't matching and some of the lyrics weren't that clever or interesting.
If nothing else something to back up the lead synth tune, which sadly doesn't go with the voices, like it needs a pitch change or depth.
Overrall, I'm not really enjoying it as is.