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textDisplay: A reading for this one too? I'm floored. Thank you so much! I had a vague idea for a third and a more complete idea for a fourth part, but they never came to be as I moved on from MLP fanfiction. Still, thank you so much for both of these. You did a great with them :)

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textDisplay: @Victor Hurwitz You're more than welcome. I hope you guys enjoy yourselves.

textDisplay: @Vertigo 22 that is fine and I'm glad you're fine with that what I thought with the only bit of rewrite which I won't do would've been with part 1 not part 2 at all but I will respect your wishes ir do my best to respect your wishes while doing my own ideas also I will pass all this information and news to Sparrow9642 and from there we will see if the story does get finished though no promises though I hope and would like to finish it thanks again for giving me permission to potentially make something big or maybe bigger possible and maybe happen.

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textDisplay: @Victor Hurwitz I've never been asked if anyone can finish any of my stories. Though sure, go ahead and make your own conclusion story. However, I refuse to allow anyone to remake/rewrite them.

textDisplay: Fear writer of mister sunshine and the story that came before that called there's a monster in my bedroom can I ask you a huge favor or huge question. My question is that with your permission if I or someone I know or have in mind can finish or write and end your incomplete story. Look I know a may be asking a bit much but I just want to say that mister sunshine is really scary and quite horrifying you did a great job with this story the thing is is that it has given me potentially inspiration or ideas to see how to finish or of I don't write it I can give my ideas on how it could end to the ones who would have a blast with this story. I really like horror and grimdark a lot and I can say that your story is really good. Two or three people I have in mind are myself,  the shadow reader and Sparrow9642,  I was originally going to add you to that list but I realize that sounds quite dumb and won't make any sense. Here is why I chose these options one myself I enjoy horror I think I'm ok at writing some stories maybe but not much the thing is I'm more of a criticizing kind of guy to see how to help writers improve with their stories and horror and idk much about mlp only horror and grimdark so I don't think I would be the best option,  the shadow reader is someone who writes and narrates great horror stories but idk if how does much of mlp horror,  Sparrow9642 my best candidate you see he writes and narrates great mlp grimdark horror stories and I really like his content like all the others but he is really good.  I also want to ask with a bit of your permission if someone which might be me or Sparrow9642 can rewrite or mainly and I promise this much continue your story because I want to know if part 1 can be rewritten if we decide to because it isn't as good as part 2 I only see it as a possibility not as something that will happen also the story is still really good overall. One more point I want to make you see I have not read the story yet only listened to it so my next assumption might be a bit dumb if the grammar in your story is not perfect can we change it up or more of what I actually mean is touch it up or refine it just to make it a bit better. I'm saying this because some good stories have bad grammar even if the story is good I just wanted to say that. I also want to say that this is only a horror fan asking because I enjoy horror a lot and I want to see the slightest potential of continuing and  or finishing this great story. I also want to say that there is a possibility that this may not even happen because I didn't ask the other person's end or my writer options to see if they would do it , they might say no and I would have made this long message for nothing but if something happens then I'm happy if nothing happens then I'll be happy that I tried at least yeah. Sorry for this very long message I type and talk a lot but I just really enjoy horror and stuff that I really like but I wanted to ask your permission first before I went crazy or did anything potentially stupid or dumb I just don't want to accidentally cause trouble.


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Mr. Sunshine, bring me a day (bung, bung, bung, bung)
Make him the cutest that I've ever seen (bung, bung, bung, bung)
Give him two lips like roses and clover (bung, bung, bung, bung)
Then tell him that his lonesome days are over
Sunshine, I'm so alone (bung, bung, bung, bung)
Don't have nobody to call my own (bung, bung, bung, bung)
Please turn on your magic beam
Mr. Sunshine, bring me a day
Mr. Sunshine, bring me a day
Make him the cutest that I've ever seen
Give him the word that I'm not a rover
Then tell him that his lonesome days are over
Sunshine, I'm so alone
Don't have nobody to call my own
Please turn on your magic beam
Mr. Sunshine, bring me a day
Mr. Sunshine(yes) bring us a day
Give him a pair of eyes with a "come-hither" gleam
Give him a lonely heart like Pagliacci
And lots of wavy hair like Liberace
Mr Sunshine, someone to hold (someone to hold)
Would be so peachy before we're too old
So please turn on your magic beam
Mr Sunshine, bring us, please, please, please
Mr Sunshine, bring us a day

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textOriginal: Majorly marvelous and divine.

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