Normally I'm not into Dark fics or comics but wow...this was incredible! It had me on the edge of my seat wanting to know what would happen next o.o If this wasn't the last part I know I'd be waiting for a part 5! (also I know it's the last part but still ^ ^; )
Applebloom: Hey, this ain't Sweetie! Scoots: You're right, it's a dead changeling. Applebloom: Why did she fake her death? Scootaloo: Only one way to find out.
Later, these two traveled to Manehattan. Button followed in hopes to see her again. Imagine their surprise at discovering this. Sweetie Belle being the leader of a mafia.
I'm glad that she got revenge, if I was there during that time were her sister die, I would hunt every single mafia down, the will know who I am... A jury. A executioner. A judge.
I'll make a sequel to this very soon. Don't worry, I'll give the creator some credit. I'll add Applebloom, Scootaloo, and Button. You know, as adults... I'll stop talking now...
Sweetie Belle: Rarity..... Rarity! .. Rarity, wake up! Rarity: Aaeeehh.... what happened sweetie Sweetie Belle:..... I have a nightmare Rarity: Aaaaah, tell me what happened in your nightmare my little sister Sweetie Belle: Im Dreamed, with you being killed by gangters and will take you revenge, killing his leader. And, and I keeping his job, and, and, and,........ Is was awful.... Rarity:....... Dont worry, Sweetie Belle, that never being happened...... Besides i'll be by your side forever Sweetie Belle:......... Thanks, sis, Rarity: You welcome my litter sis... Sweetie Belle: Oh, Rarity, can be in your bed tonight Rarity: Of, course..... Good night Sweetie Belle Sweetie Belle: Good night Rarity
Normally I'm not into Dark fics or comics but wow...this was incredible! It had me on the edge of my seat wanting to know what would happen next o.o If this wasn't the last part I know I'd be waiting for a part 5! (also I know it's the last part but still ^ ^; )
1 likeThat was a REALLY great fan comic, and read WELL done!
0 likesI haven’t seen Revenge, but I have a feel this was heavily influenced by that series
2 likesOkay, I really loved this story so much.
0 likesBut if we don't get a sequel, I will lose it.
Fantastically wonderful and terrifically phenomenal Lotus i love it.
7 likesVery good storyline
2 likesGood work
Vengeance is one hell of a poison, but boy does it taste good when you finally obtain it. }:)
3 likeswow, just wow this was fantastic!!!!
0 likesThat was beautiful
1 likeApplebloom: Hey, this ain't Sweetie!
0 likesScoots: You're right, it's a dead changeling.
Applebloom: Why did she fake her death?
Scootaloo: Only one way to find out.
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Later, these two traveled to Manehattan.
0 likesButton followed in hopes to see her again.
Imagine their surprise at discovering this.
Sweetie Belle being the leader of a mafia.
I'm glad that she got revenge, if I was there during that time were her sister die, I would hunt every single mafia down, the will know who I am...
0 likesA jury.
A executioner.
A judge.
Deadlock
Amazing work
0 likesGeez that is dark cool but dark! I'm afraid of her now!
6 likesI wonder if this victory of hers will become bittersweet.
0 likesI'll make a sequel to this very soon.
0 likesDon't worry, I'll give the creator some credit.
I'll add Applebloom, Scootaloo, and Button.
You know, as adults... I'll stop talking now...
Was there ever a part 1? I don't think I've seen part 1 being uploaded, all I've seen is from part 2 onwards
0 likesThis is dark worse than me but still great
1 likeThis is dark worse than me but still great
1 likeOkay. All who want a sequel to this comic. Leave a like or say I.
0 likesThat was awesome Lotus
0 likesNice story,i like your video.
0 likesCan we get another clopfic? It would mean the world to a lot of us
0 likesSweetie Belle: Rarity..... Rarity! .. Rarity, wake up!
4 likesRarity: Aaeeehh.... what happened sweetie
Sweetie Belle:..... I have a nightmare
Rarity: Aaaaah, tell me what happened in your nightmare my little sister
Sweetie Belle: Im Dreamed, with you being killed by gangters and will take you revenge, killing his leader. And, and I keeping his job, and, and, and,........ Is was awful....
Rarity:....... Dont worry, Sweetie Belle, that never being happened...... Besides i'll be by your side forever
Sweetie Belle:......... Thanks, sis,
Rarity: You welcome my litter sis...
Sweetie Belle: Oh, Rarity, can be in your bed tonight
Rarity: Of, course..... Good night Sweetie Belle
Sweetie Belle: Good night Rarity
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Good ending.
1 like@MasterKen1803 thanks
1 likeWatch out for this mare.
0 likesPart 5?
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Sir Devonaire no part 5
0 likesSad
0 likes#saveyoutube
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