Huh, I think this might have benefitted from a few more takes... just so that the story would have been uninterrupted by any dialogue flubs or accidents, haha. As it is, the voices are fine, but it does take away from the story itself when a line is repeated like from 1:26 to 1:36, or when a line is added to the original story ("this inclination saved his life" does not fit the original story at all, since he's not supposed to be in any physical danger, the reader is just supposed to be spooked by the revelation of the red eyes). Hope you read this and continue improving these readings!
Huh, I think this might have benefitted from a few more takes... just so that the story would have been uninterrupted by any dialogue flubs or accidents, haha. As it is, the voices are fine, but it does take away from the story itself when a line is repeated like from 1:26 to 1:36, or when a line is added to the original story ("this inclination saved his life" does not fit the original story at all, since he's not supposed to be in any physical danger, the reader is just supposed to be spooked by the revelation of the red eyes). Hope you read this and continue improving these readings!
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The Smoking Skull thanks for the feedback
2 likesI'll try my best to improve in the future.
2 likes@Lotus Moon No problem!
2 likes@Jonas Fletcher Good luck!
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