I love that you added music to the story, Lotus. I think it made the story even more touching. One little note though: Could you make the music a little quieter in future readings? There were times I couldn't understand you over it.
Also, MLP Gal, you really do have something to be proud of, you wrote a wonderful story :).
No problem, I just spoke up to help you improve. What program are you using for sound mixing? Out of the free ones, I discovered that Audacity has quite a lot of useful features.
Perhaps, you could send me the audio track and music separately? I'd like to play around and see if I could balance it out a bit better? I have some free time tomorrow so I'd gladly try it out, could learn something new myself ;) I'll PM my e-mail to you in case you'd like to do that.
Thank you :) I started writing this Freshman Year of high school and didn't completely understand most of the things on the site, but I worked hard on it.
You made me feel more proud of the story, since this was my first story and didn't understand most things yet...
0 likesI love that you added music to the story, Lotus. I think it made the story even more touching. One little note though: Could you make the music a little quieter in future readings? There were times I couldn't understand you over it.
1 likeAlso, MLP Gal, you really do have something to be proud of, you wrote a wonderful story :).
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Fizyk sorry about that 😅 I'm still having a bit of a hard time balancing the music with reading
1 likeNo problem, I just spoke up to help you improve. What program are you using for sound mixing? Out of the free ones, I discovered that Audacity has quite a lot of useful features.
0 likesPerhaps, you could send me the audio track and music separately? I'd like to play around and see if I could balance it out a bit better? I have some free time tomorrow so I'd gladly try it out, could learn something new myself ;) I'll PM my e-mail to you in case you'd like to do that.
Fizyk actually I use Adobe Premiere for editing. But I guess I just need more practice getting the balance right.
1 likeI wrote this, then didn't come back to it til last year so there are quite a few changes with the writing growth
0 likesI'm afraid I can't hear the narration especially around 5:57 due to the music.
0 likessorry about that
1 likeVery well done indeed.
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Thank you :) I started writing this Freshman Year of high school and didn't completely understand most of the things on the site, but I worked hard on it.
0 likes+MLP Gal I think Lotus Moon did a good job too. Meant to say that before. 😅😅
0 likesYou did so much Better at the voices than I did
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It took practice
1 likethis song is like a horror game call The Evil Within Miss Moon
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